ok o.O
over all this isnt horrid ways to improve are...
. it loops bad as in it skips... fix that.
.dont use premade generic coloring i.e. the rainbow gradient and such
.dont submit a short loop unless its decent you will only be able to do that if its semi long or the art is astounding
i am a nice person adn will 5 and 10 you but do better next time no short cuts